Not Deep Enough
Well I never heard your first song(I will soon)but if this is your second then I have to say excellent work you've done here and I must advise you to keep up the good work for future music also make sure you keep away from the long intros.And even though you messed around and created a pretty good song you really shouldn't do that you should try and find inspiration then stay focus and create better songs cause you have talent so you should put it to use.